Tranquil, I stand here and gaze at the night sky
What a thrilling sight it is, to see you stars
pulsating through the night
with your radiance
You take my sight
on a course
of its own
and make
each twinkle,
a gazing trap
Vast in your splendor,
you belittle me with the limitlessness
Petite I stand, but ask you this, just once
O beautiful ones, do you know how it is to desire?
17 comments:
amusing :)
never thought of asking the stars about the last bit.
nice poem
Alone, empty, I wish the sky
would mirror today my hollow sigh
They mock me, I feel..
Twinkling, sparkling, playful
they are..
My sorrow has no regard,
the callous, different children
they are..
To see past them,
into the emptyness,
I wish I could..
Stolen my final solace,
as my enemies would..
I give up and close my eyes
to sleep..
Where their flippant laughter no more,
troubles me..
Ah unforgiven!! You remain unforgiven. What lines!!
Now, I guess I have to run and hide for the lines you wrote are much better than mine. I am glad if these lines inspired that of yours (on second thoughts).
What a desirable night:)
hmmmmmm....
I definitely don't think they are better. I don't know if they are worse. How does one judge these things anyway :P I thought yours were beautiful..
A poet should be answered in poetry you know? Hence, I had to write my answer this way :P
getting senti? :-)
an eye for an eye
a kiss for a kiss
a poem for a poem
oh god!! this is contagious!!!
Beautiful night filled with desires:)
hmm answer to ur this post..http://arunima.blogspot.com/2006/01/dumbass.html
wonderful words
loved the poem and unforgiven's lines too...
caught up with all u'r posts just now...
Metaphysical and eye-catching
Well written
no night like a star studded night..
no day if the sun is not bright..
gosh! i am appalled at my attempt! this is contagious!
i know..u both (arunima & unforgiven) talkin somethin bad abt me. tell me directly if u have the guts
those were beautiful lines!
"O beautiful ones, do you know how it is to desire? "
that was my favourite bit!
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