And sometimes, you bleed just to know you are alive.
i am puking, i am crying, i am bleeding,
until i am left with no strength
it is not just the pain, it is also the fear that it may take away my dreams, bleed them away forever...
i curl up to a ball as if this would help me stop my insides from tearing apart
you look at me concerned, while i look at you through the excruciating pain, knowing you cannot bear half the pain that i am going through
my insides turn, they ache and scream,
my heart pounds everywhere, louder than ever
As you hold me tight, i know i am not ready to die...no, not... just... yet
perhaps, the dreams will take wings again.
19 comments:
ohh!!!!
Beautiful description, yet quite scary....
Loved the way u concluded it...
whew!What inspired this,Arunima?
take care, arunima..
"this too shall pass"..
Loved the first line...
sometimes, you bleed just to know you are alive....
Just like sometimes you get hurt just to know you can feel....
I like the way you've compared bleed to life and living. Very nice.
and yes,
you can dream your dreams and make them come alive.
you can dream up the wings you need to fly.
they are yours forevermore.
then dream again to set flight your dreams galore.
And soar all the way up so high.
Cheers!
"the dreams will take wings again" The last line helped me have some more confidence towards living:)
The stork visited you? :)
very poignant... hope all well.
- anumita
you just won an award!!
take it from my place:))
They will. And the pain will then only be a distant memory.
Hope you're okay.
All well dear? Its a lovely description but morbid if it really happened to someone u know... The pain of miscarriage I am assuming... Take care
very touching and very well put...take care.
How are you,Arunima?Everything OK?Take care.
Hi,Arunima-I logged on after a week and no post-hope the health's aok-both u and the hubby?Waiting for the next post.
Hope you are feeling better now Arunima.. !! Take care..
:-(
Take care!
all okie?
i sure hope this one was about that time of the month...wudnt want it to be anything else...
u take care
?
Heyy..still no posts?Hope you're aok now,Arunima.TC.
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